|Reviews for Unloved|
| Siberia82 chapter 1 . 10/23/2003
Oh, that was so gorgeous and heartfelt. Your words hit me to the core of my being. I understand the pangs of love all too well. *sigh*
P.S. I'm glad you liked 'Unravel'! I will e-mail you the next time I update.
| Lieschen chapter 1 . 6/12/2003
You are such a good poet...but why should I be surprised ? It is reflected in your writing. You pull off the rhymes without sounding forced. Great job, and very touching.
| ginblossom chapter 1 . 5/3/2003
At first I thought the switch from rhyming to unrhyming was uncomfortable, but the direct sense of emotion throughout the piece made it blend quite well. I really feel the message of this piece and I.. *growl* know how it feels "to love and not to be loved" and the last stanza really summarizes that well. Good poem.
| hethara chapter 1 . 5/3/2003
great job- totally the situation im in now...