Reviews for if
ittybittytreefrog chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
Again, really good poem. *sighs* If only. I couldn't agree more...
ChaoxAngel chapter 1 . 5/6/2003
It's a powerful thought - and well delivered. I agreed, and I desire to leave no prints behind, but afterall, it comes down to an IF.

DW
Gemtog4319 chapter 1 . 5/6/2003
HAHAHAHA! MY BROTHER JUST PEED ON MY FACE! ITS IS SO FUNNY! Okay, I'm thirsty now. I hope to read more of your stories so I can continue to slap my knee! It reminds me of your other thriller about the nose-picking pumpkin zombies and the old roach that adored them! AHZAH
Kesshi Mashin chapter 1 . 5/5/2003
*sigh* If only... Oh well. Liked it, as per usual. Keep on writin!
wheresmydopamine chapter 1 . 5/4/2003
Wow, this is beautiful
obsidian katana chapter 1 . 5/3/2003
what a world that would be, too bad i don't think it could ever happen. nice work anyway! keep it up!
aleppine chapter 1 . 5/3/2003
I like this. I agree. Let's all strip to invisibility and not get stared at in public. Hooray.

'we could walk in the sand leaving no footprints behind' - nice!