Very interesting fic. I'd love to read more about Melody and Tempest. (Interesting choice of name for one of your main characters).

I love this story. It is so cool. Please continue to write as fast as you can cos i want to find out more!1

This is utterly fantastic.

I eagerly await the next chapter.

Awesome story! I am really really enjoying it! Hurry post more!

what's wrong with melody? please update soon.

I think this story is going really well. There is definately great potential if you just keep writing. I love "Aiden's" character. Strong heroines are too far and between around here! Keep writing!

Wonderful. I love the PoV's. What is 'Aiden's' real name, I wonder. That's about it. Keep writing. Bravo.

Hi! Me again! I really like this story, and the way it's going. Umm, wonderful writing, great character development. I didn't like this chapter as much. Too much stating of facts in a way that isn't compatible with the writing style. incorporate the things in, like the whole "aura of confidence" don't say it, show it. But otherwise, i liked it! Keep it up!

*applause* i like it! when are they going to find out that she's a girl? will there be a romance? triangles are good. Dom, Aiden and Tempest...i'd like to see that romance. thanx 4 reviewing my stories

wow... i love it! update soon!

Good, good! Definitely on my fave list! The plot is a little cliche, but the way ur writing it, it isn't. Characters are good, plot it pretty good...keep it up and keep updating!