Reviews for Intrigue
Oh-are-ay-en-gee-ee chapter 3 . 5/21/2003
Very interesting fic. I'd love to read more about Melody and Tempest. (Interesting choice of name for one of your main characters).
Shahrazad chapter 3 . 5/19/2003
I love this story. It is so cool. Please continue to write as fast as you can cos i want to find out more!1
Captured Dawn chapter 3 . 5/19/2003
This is utterly fantastic.

I eagerly await the next chapter.
organized-chaos1 chapter 3 . 5/17/2003
Awesome story! I am really really enjoying it! Hurry post more!
TheAwakenerViari chapter 3 . 5/17/2003
what's wrong with melody? please update soon.
Artemis the Brave chapter 3 . 5/16/2003
I think this story is going really well. There is definately great potential if you just keep writing. I love "Aiden's" character. Strong heroines are too far and between around here! Keep writing!
unseenbreeze chapter 3 . 5/16/2003
Wonderful. I love the PoV's. What is 'Aiden's' real name, I wonder. That's about it. Keep writing. Bravo.
Crystal Teardrop chapter 3 . 5/16/2003
Hi! Me again! I really like this story, and the way it's going. Umm, wonderful writing, great character development. I didn't like this chapter as much. Too much stating of facts in a way that isn't compatible with the writing style. incorporate the things in, like the whole "aura of confidence" don't say it, show it. But otherwise, i liked it! Keep it up!
Crystal Teardrop chapter 2 . 5/10/2003
*applause* i like it! when are they going to find out that she's a girl? will there be a romance? triangles are good. Dom, Aiden and Tempest...i'd like to see that romance. thanx 4 reviewing my stories
TheAwakenerViari chapter 2 . 5/8/2003
wow... i love it! update soon!
Crystal Teardrop chapter 1 . 5/3/2003
Good, good! Definitely on my fave list! The plot is a little cliche, but the way ur writing it, it isn't. Characters are good, plot it pretty good...keep it up and keep updating!
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