I really lke this story, it is great. It is like 2 stories going on at the same time, and it makes sense aswell. You have a lot of potential and this is an amazing story. I look forward to your updates in the future. R&R mi stuff and i'll return the favour -

Great few chapters, this story is great and i think i know where it is going, i may be wrong so i won't say. But i like your use of dreams and thoughts in the story, it makes it all the more enjoyable to read _

Good Good, i like this whole idea of a Blade school. It sounds kool _I will review every few chapters now, i LOVE this story so far _

OOOooOI liked this chapter, i didnt really get it, but i assume i will l8er on in the story. Geat job, _

"After all, magic was but a myth in his world… Hmm… or was it?"I LOVED THAT LINE ! It is so true,, good chapter for an opening. Starting a new story can be irritating, but u did it well. I like this story, really i do _

Oh. Getting very interesting! MORE!

I like the introduction to this character; one of the best introductions I have read on fictionpress. I look forward to reading more.
Adjournment,
R.C. Polk

WOW. That's a really cool story.

Still going strong. keep writing.

Huh? I don't get it...

Yea, it was. LOL J/K

So far I like it. It's creepy and captivating. And this dream sequence is absolutely thrilling.

Good work.

Another good chapter. Not much that I can say, considering your chapter sizes are small. Keep writing.

Don't go all 24 on us and make a cliffhanger at every end. A little bit of an engaging story. Keep the chapters coming.

Future Emperor of Iraq,

R.C. Polk

O, ah.

This story gets more and more interesting with every chapter.

Keep up the good work!