Nice. Again with the periods! Too many! You lose the feel. But that's just my style.

Dark. Deep. I can totally relate with the whole "I say what I want to say and I don't give a fuck about what you think" theme, but the whole suicide thing was kinda scary.

-BPDD

really creepy. really.

Wow...that was good...i think everyone feels that way at some time - hopefully you wont get any ideas from your writing, 'cause i would miss you!

::hugs::

wow. thats really good. i can totally relate and i do agree that everyone feels like that at one point in their lives. but yea good job!

kara

Wow, i've felt that way so many times (and sometimes put it into practice). I can really relate to how u felt when u wrote it.

Hmm, interesting. Very straight-forward but well put.

That was awesome!