Reviews for The Dogs
screamstar87 chapter 1 . 10/25/2004
Hehe. *hides dog corpses behind her* Funny :) I really do sympathise. My cat may pee in people's gardens, but at least it doesn't keep the whole street up all night trying to make sweet love to a fencepost...
Trinny B chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
whoa. you really do hate dogs, don't you? Remind me to never have a dog if I live next door to you.
Nice poem. A VERY new outlook. lol.
Trins x
Gypsy Spell chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
*giggle* wonder what happened to them. I hate little yipping dogs, their little rats, that's what I think. chiwawas are the worst. (Did I spell that right? oh well)
Loki Mischeif-Maker chapter 1 . 1/19/2004
Oh, that was cute, and with a twist to the ending. I wonder if you might be talking about toy poodles . . .
I notice a lot of people have geussed about what you could be writing about, though, and I'll not keep at it for that.
It was a very good poem. Loved it.

MinionRipley chapter 1 . 11/29/2003
*giggles* That was pretty funny. Nice idea, though. Wish that'd happen to the dogs in my neighborhood that are allowed to run free, ending in that they chase me all over the place.
Heinrich chapter 1 . 7/31/2003
Well, I know what you mean! Also, your grammar and everything was good. The ending! I wasn't expecting that! Good suprise! )

LaughingAstarael chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
My mom's friend has dogs like those, but I find them cute . Though I can relate. I like the simplicity of this. It still conveys feeling, too.


Riddle of the Wren chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
wOw...its all i can say...besides thx for ur review!
brownbear chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
omg! i hope you're only kidding... pomerians can be really noisy, my neighbor has one. they're so cute, but they can drive you up the wall! good poem, tho i hope you didn't do anything to them. hehe

Eichmanns Steinherz chapter 1 . 7/13/2003
It's true. Dogs can be a pain in the butt. Until they're gone, and you miss them... Why must this be? Oh well. Great poem! _
Knightengale chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
Lol. You wouldn't happen to be talking about chihuahuas, would you? Man, I hate those things. They're so annoying!
wonky donkey chapter 1 . 5/11/2003
Haha. Gee you must have been crushed that those poor dogs vanished.

that was funny
mark johnson chapter 1 . 5/6/2003
this is very hilarious. according to my calculation, whoever wrote this has a great sense of humor. i am funny too. u must hate dogs.