I like it, who is the one that doesn't go to the river, I have an idea on what it might be but I'm not sure, is it got to do w/ man?

Nice, I like it. That is totally awesome. Keep up the good work. And sorry again for the misinterpretation of your previous works.

I don't think this is a piece of crap like your description says! I think this is well written, it gives human qualities to a non-living thing. Very nice! The change is really great too! I give it a 9/10 if I were to rate it.