Reviews for Mayakovsky
fairytale failure chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
AH. I love the repetition of big loud hands, the lack of coherence, the 'constellation eyes', the way it reminds me of someone. This is a great poem.
Lady Fingers chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
god- this is amazing
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
Like it, a lot. Sorry - bad reviewing skills. Nice job on your piece!

eden is burning chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
Wow... I'm sorry, I don't know what to say but I loved it.
not sure yet chapter 1 . 9/18/2003
interesting, i muchly like this one, different spacing that really had a strange affect on the poem, love that, and pretty good imagery, nicely done
leningrad chapter 1 . 8/28/2003
You suck. You suck. I love this entirely.
Scars of Fantasy chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
very original-an understatement, i daresay.
E. Gao chapter 1 . 5/23/2003

mayakovsky/big hands/constellation of eyes/

very very cool.

geez...what is it with beautiful poets?

aleppine chapter 1 . 5/18/2003
I really loved the repetition and the phrasing used in this, it was incredibly effective. '... you were big and loud and in so much love, with the sun you murdured' - excellent, and one of many little outstanding bits. Well done.
makkenjii chapter 1 . 5/9/2003
Pardon me while I swallow my heart back into my chest.

I have sorely missed reading your work, Happily, the term is almost over, and soon I will set myself to the lengthy task of reviewing all the work that I haven't yet had a chance to read.

As for this.

It is beautiful, and the repetition and staggered phrases make it very interesting. And my favourite piece is the end. And I leave you to guess out the rest.
Paradoxical Goddess chapter 1 . 5/5/2003
*grins* you know what they say about poets with big, loud hands...