|Reviews for Kindling|
| Sunflower Philosophy chapter 1 . 7/6/2003
Tell me something, have you been reading my thoughts for the past two years? This poem is me. Period. I read it once and read it twice and felt it melt into me and become. Again, metaphors spectacular... each word of yours is a perfect jewel set in a glittering sheet of gold, painting a brilliantly beautiful picture...
"The dance is ever wise, the race ever foolish"... this line is just... *flails hopelessly, at a complete loss for words*
Don't think this thing'll escape my favorites.
m~* Sunflower, anyone?
| E. Gao chapter 1 . 5/24/2003
for some reason mademoiselle reminds me of julie andrews a la mary poppin;
I dunno, maybe it's the "parasol wings" line? _;;
I have to admit, though- very very lovely, love how you tied it in with the other character.
[spins around] whee!
| Queenofrefuse chapter 1 . 5/9/2003
the flow of this poem is absolutely amazing. it reads so well. you have such great descriptions of everthing about this character. i don't know how you do it! :)
| Karbon Okapi chapter 1 . 5/9/2003
I just love this one (as always!) My favorite part is from "Mademoiselle is passionate black" to "Mademoiselle has her heart to unpack." It's got what makes your poetry just amazing- beautiful, original, emotional imagery.