Reviews for Lies of the Heart
crazydaisyyy chapter 17 . 11/3/2014
omg this story! so much feels I LOVE IT
Zero Skye chapter 17 . 12/26/2013
Finally! Matt and Natalie are together! I had been so frustrated with Nat throughout the story for not realizing that Matt was the perfect guy for her. Just so happy with the ending!
Nami98 chapter 17 . 9/1/2013
Oh my God. I have never read a story so perfect as this. I LAUGHED, I cried, and I felt emotions that I never thought I could feel from reading a story. Wow. Definitely one of my all time favorite stories. :)
lollipop addict chapter 17 . 7/22/2013
Oh my freaking pegasus! This is so cute! I'll be "awwww"ing for at least ten minutes now! Cuuuute!
LizASmith chapter 17 . 11/30/2012
Loved the story. You know, you should tweak the summary a bit, it'd probably attract more attention!
Bertie the Redwood chapter 17 . 7/14/2011
Ridiculously cute! Loved it!
splinteringtheglass chapter 17 . 12/30/2010
OMG I KNEW IT. I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW IT. Ha. Matt was doing the same thing he kept telling Nat do to with Jeremy. I AM SUCH A GENIUS.


Sorry. It's a bloody brilliant story, by the way. Loved the plot. And it was so sweet. And confusing. I don't think I want my senior year to be like that. Too much drama :D
sweetpoet2003 chapter 16 . 9/9/2010
"I spat, "Who's screaming now, bitch?" Oh lordy I almost spit out my drink when I read that. awesome line. love the story. i'm finding it very hard to look serious while I'm work and reading this. kudos
KissesInTheRain14 chapter 18 . 9/26/2009
OMG! this story is amazing! i was just bored today so i was going through all the old stories and i saw this and i was like what the heck and its awesome! Nat REALLY frustrated me sometimes but the ending was the best! i loved it! im a hopless romantic and this is exactly the kind ov story i love! thanks for curing my bordom! keep writing, cuz it deffinatly your calling!
Dead Deactivated chapter 18 . 7/27/2009
FANTASTIC! Please write the Sequel unless you already have!
Darian Quest chapter 18 . 6/24/2009
awee that was so cute. I spent a whole day reading this and even cussed out my cousins for interupting me in reading this. This was outrageously good and the ending was so cliche, but I loved it!]
Silly Little Storywriter chapter 18 . 6/19/2009
Oh, I liked that one much more. The right people ended up together, which made a big difference.

My only gripes were fixed/explained by the end. Which were: Natalie's obsession and selfishness (but she realised she was being a dope in the end). And the sisterly hatred, which, although far too extreme for most of it, was fixed by the end. As someone who has two sisters (who at times can be very annoying, especially when pregnant), I know that it is impossible to hate your siblings unless they do something totally heinous. Just having different tastes and friends doesn't breed that kind of hatred.

Apart from that, I really liked it. Matt was a much better hero than Donovan or Jason (who were both a bit wet). Jeremy was... well he was what he was meant to be. A filler. But I honestly can't understand why girls like him. He needed to grow a pair. Hah! But that wasn't a bad thing, as it made it more obvious who you were meant to be rooting for.

Much better characterisation and storyline on the whole.

Glad I could stop being a downer for this one!

Me-LikesYou chapter 18 . 4/16/2009
OMG, i totally loved this story...

Nat is this really funny, really naive, and really realistic character. And Matt is cute! I'm happy they ended up together.

I really like the ending of your story. I mean, with some stories, the end just seems forced, yeah? Like, there is no closure. So anyway, i'm gonna check out the rest of your stories. Keep writing dude. Really!
Star Dot Storm chapter 18 . 4/2/2009
oh my gosh! send this to a publisher! this NEEDS to become a book! thank you so much for writing this! nat and matt are perfect for each other!
kaw97 chapter 18 . 3/30/2009
I really liked this story. I was sure rooting for the Matt and Natalie ending! I wasn't sure how you would gracefully get Jeremy out of the picture. He might have been a little too nice about that, but that sounds like Jeremy. LOL
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