Reviews for Internal Battle
Chris Rodriguez chapter 1 . 5/7/2003
very nice... very well thought out. The name could use a face lift...it throws the reader off the topic later...
angie chapter 1 . 5/7/2003
its very hard to describe what it is telling me..i really like it...one of my favs.
willowkeyjey chapter 1 . 5/7/2003
:D YAY! you wrote something with a happy ending very very good peom (i've been there but you know that ;) ) A friend and fellow writer: willowkeyjey
Tenshi1 chapter 1 . 5/6/2003
truely moving. your format gives it a jumbled/hasty and confused feeling when reading - but then again what other way can you describe inner war?