Reviews for Untitled
Damaged chapter 1 . 6/24/2003
I love how you wrote this. It starts out with a broken heart, and then ends with with "nothing but contempt from me". That was powerful! Keep writing!
d7-Poet chapter 1 . 5/20/2003
Wow. Great write! Keep up the cool-ness.
DeeTzy chapter 1 . 5/6/2003
Only a true friend of yours would know what this was about. Luckily for you I am that friend...

I really like the way the style changes as it gets to the end..it was more dramatic somehow. It was kinda like a song :)

-Dee
S. L. Gordon chapter 1 . 5/6/2003
*sigh* sadness. Very clear in message.