Reviews for The Clock Strikes Twleve
Chiclets chapter 1 . 9/29/2006
You are quite a talented writer and I most certainly like the way you express yourself. I really enjoyed this piece; good job.
Hester Inkmaid chapter 1 . 11/28/2004
It's a nice poem. The rhymes in the first stanza are great- "melodramatic", "psychotic"- I have a weakness for cool rhymes like that. :)

Some of the analogies are too subtle for me to get, some are rather clever, and some cliched and tiresome, but on the whole they inspire me. I love analogies, and I love poems filled with it, and symbolic, hidden meanings to them.

I think I'll go and write one of my own. :)
Lost Butterfly chapter 1 . 7/21/2003's so well written...i knew you could write stories but poems too? .
WhisperBlack chapter 1 . 5/7/2003
beautiful, just...beautiful