Reviews for Hold my hand
akaSummer chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
I like it! It describes everyone at some point or another. There's always someone who's not ready to let writing

Gemtog4319 chapter 1 . 5/14/2003
DISCREPANCIES! WHY HAVE YOU PUT TOO MANY DISCREPANCIES! DID YOU RUN TO GET ELECTED! I'M NOT MAD, I'M JUST STATING FACTS! it was too long... they're not in a vacuum... no one can be in here today... everybody should just leave.
Isay chapter 1 . 5/8/2003
Sweet haiku. Nice.

Janne Doe chapter 1 . 5/8/2003
Aw... Sounds like me and my bf... Given my choice, I'd never let him go... GREAT JOB!

Trinity Heart
Kesshi Mashin chapter 1 . 5/7/2003
obsidian katana chapter 1 . 5/7/2003
graet haiku! very sweet and heartfelt. good job! keep on writing! btw, yeah, it was "poison"
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 5/7/2003
That was wonderful!

~Heart of the Sword
Princess Mulan chapter 1 . 5/7/2003
This is not pointless! This is really romantic.

I like the feelings of not wanting to let go here, I feel that way with a lot of things.

I think this is a nice haiku
ChaoxAngel chapter 1 . 5/6/2003
Very nice and romantic - Don't let go~~

ColorCrayons chapter 1 . 5/6/2003
i liked it. very interesting. cute, too