Reviews for Once upon a time |
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![]() ![]() ![]() If Caleb is so famous, why haven't any paparazzi shown up yet? A 17 year old girl would make quite a scandal. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You keep throwing in these ominous sentences right in the middle of happy moments. You seem to enjoy cat & mouse too much, oh cruel and heartless author you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the things i love about this story: 1. the plot 2. the characters and their smooth developments 3. it's pace |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this so far :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() one word. aw |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS STORY ROX! i read it while sick for 2 days and have loved every minute of it (lol btw i found ur story through the favourites of an author who wrote a VERY similar story called, 'living with trey duvall') THIS STORY ROX! UR A REALLY TALENTED WRITER!PLZ CONTINUE TO WRITE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw theyre so perfect! i loved this! |
![]() ![]() I really enjoyed your story! I was randomly going through Fictionpress after not looking on here in so long and happened to stumble across your story. I couldn't tear myself away from it. I loved how the characters developed and I was able to get such a visual in my head of what you were describing! Now I realize its been quite some time since you wrote this and all, however, I was curious if you ever did write a sequel to this story? If so I would love to read it some day :) If there is not one, I think the way you left it was well put, and like the girl I am, I gave a soft sigh at the end hahahaha. I hope that throughout this time between writing this story and now that you have continued to write because you honestly do have a talent. Anyhoo, now that I've rambled on quite enough, I'll leave you be hahaha. I hope everything has gone well with you and I hope that you continue to write, I look forward to reading more of your stuff in the future |
![]() ![]() aw...a lil too sapy for me but still okay |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, dramatic music... can't wait for next chapter! (but losing computer access in one min, so will have to...) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol, it's so funny to see you write "freakage"... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, nice way to start a kiss. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Balcony scenes are great aren't they? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh good, you didn't put in a bit about someone being seasick... lol |