|Reviews for Once upon a time|
| leavesfallingup chapter 7 . 5/18/2014
If Caleb is so famous, why haven't any paparazzi shown up yet? A 17 year old girl would make quite a scandal.
| leavesfallingup chapter 8 . 12/17/2013
You keep throwing in these ominous sentences right in the middle of happy moments. You seem to enjoy cat & mouse too much, oh cruel and heartless author you.
| witeaya chapter 27 . 7/20/2011
the things i love about this story:
1. the plot
2. the characters and their smooth developments
3. it's pace
| impossibly-infinite chapter 27 . 1/12/2011
I love your story! :)
| Dustland chapter 3 . 8/10/2010
I really love this so far :)
| lostlette chapter 27 . 4/7/2010
one word. aw
| buznuz1 chapter 27 . 7/10/2009
THIS STORY ROX! i read it while sick for 2 days and have loved every minute of it (lol btw i found ur story through the favourites of an author who wrote a VERY similar story called, 'living with trey duvall') THIS STORY ROX! UR A REALLY TALENTED WRITER!PLZ CONTINUE TO WRITE!
| book.babe15 chapter 27 . 12/7/2008
aw theyre so perfect! i loved this!
| Lisa chapter 27 . 12/23/2007
I really enjoyed your story! I was randomly going through Fictionpress after not looking on here in so long and happened to stumble across your story. I couldn't tear myself away from it. I loved how the characters developed and I was able to get such a visual in my head of what you were describing! Now I realize its been quite some time since you wrote this and all, however, I was curious if you ever did write a sequel to this story? If so I would love to read it some day :) If there is not one, I think the way you left it was well put, and like the girl I am, I gave a soft sigh at the end hahahaha. I hope that throughout this time between writing this story and now that you have continued to write because you honestly do have a talent. Anyhoo, now that I've rambled on quite enough, I'll leave you be hahaha. I hope everything has gone well with you and I hope that you continue to write, I look forward to reading more of your stuff in the future
| ophelia chapter 27 . 10/8/2007
aw...a lil too sapy for me but still okay
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 15 . 8/10/2007
Oh, dramatic music... can't wait for next chapter! (but losing computer access in one min, so will have to...)
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 8 . 8/10/2007
Lol, it's so funny to see you write "freakage"...
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 7 . 8/10/2007
Haha, nice way to start a kiss.
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 4 . 8/10/2007
Balcony scenes are great aren't they?
| MeiLeeCalifornia chapter 3 . 8/10/2007
Oh good, you didn't put in a bit about someone being seasick... lol