|Reviews for Once upon a time|
| tigress33 chapter 16 . 7/31/2003
Carlos seems really cool. Hopefully Caleb will explain what he was talking about before that made him all moody. You're doing a great job, keep up the wonderful work.
| Jess chapter 16 . 7/30/2003
This chp is very good! hehe... (_) Can't wait to read more!
| Kodiak Bear chapter 16 . 7/30/2003
Aw. I'm glad their meeting again went all right. Hehe, I really like this story, and pretty please update ASAP. I want to read more! LOL!
| You Need More Flair chapter 16 . 7/30/2003
Goody! Please update! I'd like one!
| Zabella chapter 8 . 7/30/2003
I'm loving it so far!
| Grunge Muffin chapter 16 . 7/30/2003
'have a good one, you're all legends?' LMAO. How ocker are you! carn, champion! hey, is it true that queenslanders speak really slowly and slur their words? becuase people have been teasing me about that. i think's it's becuase of the warm weather that we have, it makes us all lazy. I've just decided that i'm not going to say one word about the story, other than this saying that i'm not going to say one word about the story...can't resist. Caleb is back! 'cue some bad eminem.' guess who's back, back again, Caleb's back, tell a friend
| salzstar chapter 15 . 7/26/2003
Aw. C'mon. You always end the chapters at the best part!
Love the story so far, really do, please continue writing.
| Grunge Muffin chapter 15 . 7/26/2003
Dum dum DUM *dramatic music* Damn Caleb, damn him to hell! How can he do this? I ask you, really. He should take some lessons from Ben's book. Never give up. Honestly. *shakes head while tutting like a grandma* but looking forward to the London scene. I get the feeling the next chapter is going to be all the Waifs 'London Still.' good song. But very sad. Don't make it sad. and update faster! or else i will strip from you your Ben fanclub rights. and thanks for your very evil review that you left. I can't remember exactly what you said, BUT IT WASN'T VERY NICE. on the plus side, Australia won last night :D
| You Need More Flair chapter 15 . 7/25/2003
This is positively lovely.
I have now decided to put you on my favorites list.
I love this story.
At first I was annoyed at the little "present tense" glimpses, but I kind of find them endearing now.
I like how you're making Caleb and Bree's relationship real as opposed to the whole "boy meets girl, gets girl, screws girl, goes through trials and tribulations with girl (almost always including a pregnancy scare or pregnancy), makes up with girl, and they live happily every after."
I really like Bree. She reminds me of me more than a lot of the characters I like.
Please don't make Bree loose Caleb's ring. That would be so mean to your characters.
Once again, I really enjoyed reading this and I am glad I took the time to go through every chapter.
Please update, because I want to know what happens next.
-Maya, the Elton John fan
| sHortiiL chapter 15 . 7/25/2003
aww. :( i can't wait till they see each other. i can't believe caleb is acting all distant and shit. yuck. i really hope things between the two will be okay.
| kodiak bear chapter 15 . 7/25/2003
aw. *sniffles* that is sad. gr. dumb caleb. he should have more faith in her. oh well. update as soon as possible, i wanna read about their reunion!
| Jess chapter 15 . 7/25/2003
I can't wait to read the part when they met in London! Please continue soon! Did someone appears or something happen that cause this problem between Caleb and Bree, beside the distance thing?
| annchick1273 chapter 15 . 7/25/2003
caleb is acting like a total ass. i don't know why but i hope he breaks up with bree. *haha* i'm evil :D
| Alison Ashley chapter 15 . 7/25/2003
No, No! Caleb and Bree belong together. They both can't just break up. I hope it's a happy ending for Caleb and Bree.
| Nicole Patterson chapter 14 . 7/22/2003
Woah, woah, woah. And you're just stoping there? Come on! You have to update soon because I have to know what happens now that 'the calm' is over and 'the storm' is a-brewin. lol, ok, so, update soon, k? k!