Reviews for Once upon a time |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OOber cute! I heart your stories! Keep posting! -Marry |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! how sweet! I can't wait to see what happens next. I want something to happen with Caleb! I like him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay seriously, you've outdone yourself this time! I'm hooked, completely hooked! Your characters are so real (like they always are) and you description fits so perfectly. I think you are writing ever girl's fantasy with whatever actor they're in love with. If this happened to me, I think I would die. Question: is Bree reading her diary from a past year, or writing in it? I was a little confused, but other than that it's excellent! Practically seemless! Thanks for reviewing and I promise to get some more chapters up soon! Thanks again! -Marry |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh. More from the balcony! I can't wait. and you know that I really won't be able to. I nag alot about new chapters. So i hope you update soon. I really like this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol. Thanks Rach! you're right, I have been very I really liked this chapter, and in fact, I really like this story. So you have too keep writing more, and posting faster. I already know you have most of this story written, because you told me. So there is no excuse. So post more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have to write more! I love this story, you've got me hanging on for more? Are Caleb and Bree gonna get together in the next chapter? please upd8 quickly! |
![]() ![]() i don't know what it is about this story, but i love it. and another thing i don't understand is why i ended the chapter giggling like a schoolgirl? maybe cause i still am a school girl, but since when do i giggle? |
![]() ![]() COOL! |
![]() ![]() I love the story so far! please update soon! |
![]() ![]() a very cool first chapter. i do hope you do keep posting cause i want to see what happens. caleb is deffinately starting to grow on me! hehehe. i don't know what it is about accents, but they work nonetheless. i'll be off to read some other of your published works then. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I like it. It's really good so far. I definetly want to read more. Keep writing! |