Reviews for Once upon a time |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Took me forever to review this, but it was such a good story. True, not written in the typical "good" manner, but the way you told it fit it perfectly. Your characters were believable, and I wanted to know them, nerdy as that sounds. *lol* Yes, cheesy romance, but very well done at that! *thumbs up* It could be fun to read a sequel and see how the relationship progresses now that they're sure of each other, and more in the public eye . . . *hint* -Erin _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha! I couldn't stop reading! I read 2 1/2 hours straight! You're story took up my precious time! and it's ALL you're fault! But, haha. The story was fabrific! (my word for fabulous and terrific) Anywho, adios! -Steph |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I've only read the first chapter so far and I'm like...urging and rushing to read more. The chapter most DEFINITELY grabs the readers attention! Great job! -Steph |
![]() ![]() ![]() top shop is amazing! sorry... had to say that... *grins* i love your story so far... must keep reading now :o) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i just wanted to tell you i'm enjoying this and i will continue reading it! if you can please review my fic about a movie star, "living with trey duvall," lataz, Kris |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey there, how's it going? Hope your exams weren't too evil! Just a short note to say that this story really rocked and I hope you'll be posting the sequel soon! (extra exclamation marks for extra encouragement - !) |
![]() ![]() sorry cant be stuffed to login. ok WOW i found this story yesterday and just couldnt stop reading it! caleb is so cute. love your style of writing and am so sorry its over! hope to see more of your things up! ciao -x- |
![]() ![]() sorry cant be stuffed to login. ok WOW i found this story yesterday and just couldnt stop reading it! caleb is so cute. love your style of writing and am so sorry its over! hope to see more of your things up! ciao -x- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Happy ending! . *smiles contentedly* And yes I did read the author's note... thanks for clarifying that. Lol and bass is my specialty... hahaha... who I am so tired... I think I'll leave now and go to bed. What's the sequel gonna be called? ~*White*~*Yoshi*~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() u know, one point i was half a mind to just stop reading this story because Caleb was being such a git, but now im glad that its all fine and dandy between them. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, the epilogue! Finally! I can't wait to read the sequel. Hmm, ideas for the sequel... a bitch-fight with someone she doesn't even know who's been "in love" with Caleb since, I don't know, forever! Major scene with her other friends about why she never told them. Um... an interview with "Who Weekly", some big scandal about Caleb and/or her that isn't even true, something good out of being known to the public, too, like fan mail? Well, maybe the fan mail is a stupid idea but I hope I've inspired you on an incident or two that will take place in the sequel. Good luck for the rest of your HSC and I hope to get an email from Author Alert soon to say that you've posted the new story. Ciao, PV |
![]() ![]() oh. sweet ending, *sniffles*, where's my tissues? ;; there's a SEQUEL! boy, i sure can't wait. patience is NOT one of my virtues. anyway, good luck on ur HSCs, and the new sequel! you can be sure i'll be back to read it! ;; thanks for a great story! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heehee. WELL, wasn't that surprising? NOT! cause I'd already read it! ha ha to everyone who had to wait! but it was just as good the second time around. I've been thinking, and your comment about the Ben and Caleb fanclubs crossing over made me think - we should do a spin off and cross the stories over. think about it! lol. So much hotness in one story! and we'd double our readershipness, people who read yours, and people who read mine etc...then of course they'd have to read our other stories for background...lol anyhoo, maybe, Ben could get a guest role in one of Caleb's movies, or something. It would be funny. anyway, you can think about that! so much hotness for one story! lol. good job, can't wait for the sequel. |
![]() ![]() That was great! aw im so glad this part ended with such a sweet moment. Can't wait for the sequel! More Bree and Caleb, yay! Good luck for the HSC! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woo hoo! Awesome chapter! I think you ended that rather well. Keep writing! |