Reviews for the forgotten kiss
wonky donkey chapter 1 . 5/29/2003
Wow this was brilliant. Very meaningful and it rhymes freakin perfectly, example of a great rhyme: on the taste of our last kiss/the sourness is overwhelming- Kiss and sourness~that is fantastic. I really like this its going on my favorites. Please review some of my stuff if you get a chance.

s-pannrada chapter 1 . 5/7/2003
Very dramatic.

Great poem.
Exceedingly Eccentric chapter 1 . 5/7/2003
Wow, this is great. I can completely relate-good job and kudos to you!
Alone27 chapter 1 . 5/7/2003
Excelent! It is on my favorite stories list. I love it!