Reviews for a war waged
Turtle Sensei chapter 1 . 5/13/2003
hm i LIKE i LIKE! lol uhmm shortest review of mine EVER! nice like the no-rhyme thingy...i can't not rhyme lol i do it even when i speak...when i'm serious anyways...bai! ~*~Rain*~*Styorm~*~ *~*A.K.A.~*~"Turtle"*~*
hurtmushroom chapter 1 . 5/8/2003
way deep, great imagery, loved it!

cio, hoellenwauwau
Xero Maverick chapter 1 . 5/8/2003
Something about this poem... there's no rhyme scheme, just a bit of rhythm... but there is good symbolism. You've made up for the lack of rhyming(which isn't always a bad thing) with a symbolic and very nice-sounding poem. Good job.