Reviews for The School Bus Trip From Hell
Kathleen Grant chapter 1 . 5/8/2003
That was a bus ride from hell! Jeez, your poor friend... give 'im a hug for me! _

~queen of the clarinets
Captain Vimes chapter 1 . 5/8/2003
The story is pretty good, however, I would suggest elaborating and not capitalizing every word.

Also, if you do elaborate, try to attach a more coherent storyline
Lyria Shard chapter 1 . 5/8/2003
Lol, how funny, i enjoyed this more than both the other ones. Great!