Reviews for Never Leave Me
Patrick Skahan chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
I like the concept alot, however the excessive comma use after every line is somewhat distracting it makes the rhythm seem awkward, but other then that I like the topic its real.
DHABUZ chapter 1 . 3/27/2004
i cant exactly describe this poem
but its very nice
cantwakeup chapter 1 . 9/1/2003
It's pretty good. Sort of reminds me of the song 'Concrete Angel' :P

Good job!
Savak chapter 1 . 1/11/2003
Oh my God... this so... haunting. And beautiful. I agree with the other reviewer. This would kick ass as a song!

Thanks for sharing this lovely, (albeit very sad!) piece of art.
Selena Benilo chapter 1 . 1/7/2001
I remember this. It would make a killer .
Alia Nabil chapter 1 . 12/8/2000
this is nice... nothing else to say... ciao
WRE chapter 1 . 12/3/2000
Oh that's really sad! Sweet, I like.
PM20 chapter 1 . 12/3/2000
Great poem, but sad