stan, this is really good. aside from some repeated words (tunic, silver) in 1 paragraph its great. you should keep adding to it, at the very least to see how far you can go with the it. hehe, might want to change the description though, its very... cliche, lol. doesnt do the story justice, write something more in depth for it, it will attract more people to R&R it.

hm. interesting.

Wow, this is great Stan! I can't wait to read more.