Reviews for God of my World |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey this is a really great story and I would love to read more. i know it is old but please continue it! ~L.A. Fleming |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is awesome! I am loving it! It's great! I don't like Loralai! Right, Mr. Schoodles? Please keep writing. (Why did you switch Norse and Greek mythology?) I love this story, and I can't wait for the next update! |
![]() ![]() I Really Love This Story, And I Usually Hate reading, Yet I Read This One All Day And Actually Enjoyed It, You Did A Very Good Job In Describing The Characters, And I Hope You Update Soon:) |
![]() ![]() You weren't, by any chance, planning to come back from the dead once again, were you? I really enjoyed reading your story! I love the subtle changes in Ares and can't wait to see what happens in the end. Keep up the good work and write more sometime! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i simply adore the devineness of vulnerbility in bad boys ah... true romantic speaking here. in the end, i always hope for the bad guys (cool, non chalant) to change at least a bit for the girl. btw, of COURSE the reason why i adore ares is not because of his six pack:p pwhahaha |
![]() ![]() ![]() yaya~ i love this chappi, but before i got all confused about him refering to the girl as "cherie"? anyway, haha points for the wave thing as a turning point, i loved that part~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() hehe love the action, love the boy, heck i even love the girl... nice chappie~ i see more action coming up |
![]() ![]() ![]() you seem to haf a fetish with curls, tho they are gorgeous: |
![]() ![]() ![]() bishounen! *drools* hehe, i like the "wry"ish humour that is much more apparent in this chapter, for want of a better word. sarcastic? dark? well, its humorous anyway *goes on little headless chicken rant* |
![]() ![]() ![]() shes fine. i like the battle of emotions, and i like that she's strong and NOT like the weak damsel in distress (which i am against, as u prob noe) and my very wise eng teacher once said, "human emotions are complex. they RARELY if ever feel only ONE emotion at one time" haha i totally agree judging from my own emotions and random actions resulting from those emotions *runs around like a headless chicken* see?:p |
![]() ![]() ![]() we like a*les who turn out to be nice on some level... wonder how he got to be such an ass in the frist place?:p 100 reviews yet? i fink il make up the 100_v |
![]() ![]() ![]() read 2 chappies in a go. this current chapter is really good, cos it makes the guy seem more human(more lovable:p) ah... maybe im just a "sucker" for the dark ominous types. yeah i was just flickin through my reviews if u wer wonderin why i read this story so long after it was last updated, and i decided to chek out if my readers wrote stuff so here i am reviewing (much in the way of the headless chicken;)), plus im enjoyin the story so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() o i love this chapter!:) and who says you cant do action scenes? they were quite good! *swings laser beam at ppl who think you can't do action scenes* |
![]() ![]() ![]() i'm not usually one for sci-fi, even if it is sci-fi romance, but the plot seems really interesting, and i would lik to see the guy brought down a peg or two:p, i also want to find out for about this "ravaged" (sorry cant find the word for it) world |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, wow, i like this little intro to the story, it piques my interest and the writing style is very nice, one i can relate to... well, onto the next chapter for me~ |