Reviews for God of my World
L.A. Fleming chapter 16 . 7/11/2006
Hey this is a really great story and I would love to read more. i know it is old but please continue it!

~L.A. Fleming
The-Account chapter 16 . 9/10/2005
This is awesome! I am loving it! It's great! I don't like Loralai!

Right, Mr. Schoodles?

Please keep writing. (Why did you switch Norse and Greek mythology?)

I love this story, and I can't wait for the next update!
Tiffanie chapter 16 . 6/23/2005
I Really Love This Story, And I Usually Hate reading, Yet I Read This One All Day And Actually Enjoyed It, You Did A Very Good Job In Describing The Characters, And I Hope You Update Soon:)
Brittany chapter 16 . 5/7/2005
You weren't, by any chance, planning to come back from the dead once again, were you? I really enjoyed reading your story! I love the subtle changes in Ares and can't wait to see what happens in the end. Keep up the good work and write more sometime!
eyesofahuntress chapter 13 . 5/2/2005
i simply adore the devineness of vulnerbility in bad boys ah... true romantic speaking here. in the end, i always hope for the bad guys (cool, non chalant) to change at least a bit for the girl. btw, of COURSE the reason why i adore ares is not because of his six pack:p pwhahaha
eyesofahuntress chapter 12 . 5/2/2005
yaya~ i love this chappi, but before i got all confused about him refering to the girl as "cherie"? anyway, haha points for the wave thing as a turning point, i loved that part~
eyesofahuntress chapter 10 . 5/2/2005
hehe love the action, love the boy, heck i even love the girl... nice chappie~ i see more action coming up
eyesofahuntress chapter 9 . 5/2/2005
you seem to haf a fetish with curls, tho they are gorgeous:
eyesofahuntress chapter 8 . 5/2/2005
bishounen! *drools* hehe, i like the "wry"ish humour that is much more apparent in this chapter, for want of a better word. sarcastic? dark? well, its humorous anyway *goes on little headless chicken rant*
eyesofahuntress chapter 7 . 5/2/2005
shes fine. i like the battle of emotions, and i like that she's strong and NOT like the weak damsel in distress (which i am against, as u prob noe) and my very wise eng teacher once said, "human emotions are complex. they RARELY if ever feel only ONE emotion at one time" haha i totally agree judging from my own emotions and random actions resulting from those emotions *runs around like a headless chicken* see?:p
eyesofahuntress chapter 6 . 5/2/2005
we like a*les who turn out to be nice on some level... wonder how he got to be such an ass in the frist place?:p 100 reviews yet? i fink il make up the 100_v
eyesofahuntress chapter 5 . 5/2/2005
read 2 chappies in a go. this current chapter is really good, cos it makes the guy seem more human(more lovable:p) ah... maybe im just a "sucker" for the dark ominous types. yeah i was just flickin through my reviews if u wer wonderin why i read this story so long after it was last updated, and i decided to chek out if my readers wrote stuff so here i am reviewing (much in the way of the headless chicken;)), plus im enjoyin the story so far!
eyesofahuntress chapter 3 . 5/2/2005
o i love this chapter!:) and who says you cant do action scenes? they were quite good! *swings laser beam at ppl who think you can't do action scenes*
eyesofahuntress chapter 2 . 5/2/2005
i'm not usually one for sci-fi, even if it is sci-fi romance, but the plot seems really interesting, and i would lik to see the guy brought down a peg or two:p, i also want to find out for about this "ravaged" (sorry cant find the word for it) world
eyesofahuntress chapter 1 . 5/2/2005
hey, wow, i like this little intro to the story, it piques my interest and the writing style is very nice, one i can relate to... well, onto the next chapter for me~
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