|Reviews for God of my World|
| demoness online chapter 16 . 1/7/2005
I'm realy enjoying your story so far I hope that you update soon.
| MimiGhost chapter 16 . 12/12/2004
update sonlurve da fic
| beve chapter 15 . 10/23/2004
oh btw,i really have given up on 'aishiteru means i love u'-it sucks so bad im afraid just to look at it.
anyway,i've got a better story i've planned out-two actually,i just havent posted it up.
so erm...hurry up and review!
| beve chapter 16 . 10/23/2004
when are u freaking going to upload next?
| Carla chapter 16 . 8/25/2004
I'm loving this story! I really hope you don't decide to vanish for another unknown amount of time. Update soon!
| kaika switched chapter 16 . 7/19/2004
You finally updated! I loved the chapter and I love Ares. Just can't help myself. Keep writing!
| decree of fate chapter 16 . 7/9/2004
yay! ur back! :) i loved it!
| dry sherry chapter 16 . 7/4/2004
He's back! Yay! Ares is back! He still sounds so hot... I had to re-read some chapters becuause I forgot what happened! Update more! This story, as I said once so so long ago, ROCKS! (Ares rocks too). So please update more! (not that I should be talking, but you know...hehe...oh yeah, in case you don't know who I am, I'm the girl who writes Football Love and my nane used to be sharik). Keep writing more Ares hotness!
| Du Soleil Oriental chapter 16 . 7/1/2004
I have only deux petite complaints...
Un: Your grammatical structure is a bit off at times...and it really takes away from the wonderful geniousness that is this story! I've notice that your punctuation, spacing, and capitalization are a bit faulty at times...and there is this annoying little habit you seem to have or replacing the noun "you" with the letter "u." I have real issues with IM shorthand...I think it sucks! . Oh yah, and there were a small army of references to Raye and Ares...especially early on. I dunno what you did, but you you swiched your hes and shes and hers and hises around alot. And that makes it kinda confusing.
But anyway I don't expect you to go back through and fix all of those mistakes...however it'd be really awesome if you took steps to prevent them in further chapters (which I am looking forward to with the utmost of enthusiasm). And now I shall make the generous offer to be your humble and devoted beta reader! I shall find those nasty blemishes and render them non exhistent! Please? That is if no one else has the job already.
And Deux: If it isn't to much to ask...could you spew out another wonderous chapter for us? I'm sure we'd be greatly appreciative.
I'm even going to click on each one of those lovely little boxes I see below... .
| maybeXtomorrow chapter 16 . 7/1/2004
hey.. how about a sooner update next time! haha. i enjoy this story. its very interesting. yay. well update soon.
| I-eat-Paste chapter 16 . 7/1/2004
Yah an update! I read this story a long time ago but never reviewed it but now that you updated it I feel like i have to! Anyway I love it! It's probably one if not my favorite on this site! You're such a great writer! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
| yvonne chapter 16 . 7/1/2004
wow.. you've really got my interest
do update ]
| esperenze chapter 15 . 6/15/2004
I hate it when writers like you have a wonderful story and then have 3-4-5 months between updates! it's no fair! Please update more often
| Sara chapter 15 . 5/16/2004
Hey, this is really good, I hope that you update soon. I don't really wanna wait too much longer! hahaha
maybe more interaction? hmm
| Irish Elf chapter 15 . 4/28/2004
did you abandon the story? is there hope for when summer rolls around?