what the hell is this? i thought it was gonna be like a regular story but this is some freak bongo shit

hehe! Awesome! - (Okay, no, it doesn't take me this long to read stuff normally. I just kept getting kicked off the computer all the time -;;) Great job mb, I love this so far! Gah! Now I really wanna know what happens! *lol* You got me all worked up about your fic, so you're gonna have to update now -~ hehehe. And the way you write is really great, it flows really well and you have a lot of big words (I feel stupid because I had to look up one or two of the words while I was reading the fic *lol* hey, I learned some stuff! -~) I can't wait for the next chapter! Ciao!

WHEN ARE YOU UPDATING!

*lol* Sorry for not reviewing before, I'm not quite done yet - Awesome story so far! I just love the way you write. It's really deep, and your characters are great! -~ (Poor Raye *lol*) I just thought I'd pop in and say that. Cookies to you! -~ Now back to reading...

ARGHH! you havent updated in forever! we will pelt you with cookies, and squirrels, and you know, the usual. please update!

your story is so gripping... I couldn't stop reading it despite the fact that I'm supposed to be doing my homework right now P. I really like Raye, she's so loveable.

Amazing. Seriously cool. I can hardly wait until the next chapter comes out, but I know how difficult writing can be sometimes, so wait I will. Ares is developing into quite a character. It will be very interesting to find out waht happens whan he finds out his queen is not the goddess he thinks her to be. And Raye! Goodness, she is quite a strong individual, but still so very vulnerable. Hmm. Oh well, I will try to cultivate patience.

AH! i love it, i read it all at once, you write very...intellectually, i think would be the right word. anyway, please update soon !
you talented person you! i wish i could sit down and write a story, but i dont have the focus or the attention span *cries*

OMG,u R AWESOME,u wrote vey very well with good plots!
Added u to my Author Alert list :)

hey whats up whats taking u soo long. your killing me plz update i know its hard but i dont think i can go to sleep one more night without knowing what happens next. bye hope u update

Yay! You uploaded! I read! And reviewed! FINALLY the three things coincided! *celebrates* Wow, I really liked this chapter . . . is it just me or is Ares getting nicer and nicer? (Here, I gotta say that Chapter 13 kinda confused me a bit, but I'm sure I'll figure things out . . . soon . . . ) Tehehe: Chapter 14 ROCKED! Ares is just SO cute! And they ALMOST kissed! *pouts* people should have more consideration for them . . . stupid phone call! lols . . . Anyway, the story was great (as always), and I especially liked him when Raye was as "He can go to Hades for all I care" and then she went on about the myth Ares (that was a nice touch) . . . Also, her little outburst was VERY realistic and is a huge credit to YOU (duh!) . . . O! BEST PART! The setting was all serious and stuff in the bathroom and then I see this little A/N that says (h/o lemme find it ...) "its closed. lol" and I BURST OUT LAUGHING! - did you do that intentionally, or did it just happen? *giggles* silly you! Ahem, anyways, I really don't have any solid idea as to where this story is going to go next (which is one of the reasons why I love it so much!) cus right now I'm all: Ares and Raye are going to get together!(duh!) ... and then I remember all the other girls and I'm all: oh . . . tehehe. Ares complete HOTTIE I WANT AN ARES! . . . Nice ending, liked it a lot "Extremely afraid . . ." (

Booyah! That was good!

This story is SO cool! Keep up the good writing!

Great! :)

wow you did it again! wonderful but plz update more often.