Reviews for A Gray Day to Play Tennis
myno chapter 1 . 1/8/2005
Excellent 'poetic observation' as i call this sort of poem. You capture the scene and emotion masterfully, and display it for the reader with skill.
Glass Visage chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
This is adorable. It sounds weird, but I like that it doesn't rhyme And it reminds me of the boys at my school! Love it.
Brenron chapter 1 . 9/20/2003
I like this. Good job.
avidelecteur chapter 1 . 8/23/2003
This flows well. I'm no critic of free verse, but I have at least 2 friends who I'm sure would tell you to break up the lines more so that there were fewer sentences... Ah, well. I like it.
TheOneAndOnly chapter 1 . 5/29/2003
Hmm, I don't often read poems. What can I say, I like to write them, but never read them. This was an amusing subject to write about. I don't think I've ever done one on people playing tennis. But hey, you need your inspiration. This was good... now I have to go check out your other ones. :)