Reviews for Let me love you |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. Will you update some more chapters? :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() You left us in a cliffhanger.. any update plan? :F |
![]() ![]() Lad (lass?), you really need to find yourself a decent editor who is strong in English grammar. I understand that English isn't your first language, so I forgive you the atrocious grammar, but that simply underscores the need for an editor who knows English grammar. You create good stories, and they could become even better with a proper editor. Also, having an editor could help improve the story lines and inspire others as well. I know this from personal experience, as I edit for someone myself, and my feedback has both, improved the readability of the stories, and influenced the direction of the plot. But I encourage, and indeed, ardently request, that you keep on writing. I'm curious, is this series based off some existing story, or is it completely original to you? |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story is really engaging and I hope that you continue writing. Elila and Isabelle is slowly finding each other and I think that is fun to read. Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() DANG! why haven't i seen this around this is AWESOME! PLEASE hurry and get some more chapters up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting. Updates? :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh please...have mercy...please update this, this is one of the best stories ive read ever...even better than novels, believe me there are lots of crappy novels out there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a good story please write more :) I need more :) I have become a big bug fan of your story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm pretty sure your not continuing this story, but I just wanted to tell you I really enjoyed this story, and do help that someday you will come back to it. |
![]() ![]() you like really need to update this please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yup, i'm reading this at the moment...duh *smack my forhead at my stupidity*...and it's really good, but you already know that. This site won't let me email you, says something about me being new and have to wait about 24 hours before i can...ah well_ |
![]() ![]() this is so good...got me so hornnyy...haha...i wanna strangle you, haha, i just want elila to rape isabella already |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue with this story. A lot of people would love you for it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this a really awesome story i hope u continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() please write another chapter |