Reviews for Eden
Sonata IX chapter 1 . 9/6/2003
I think you captured a little piece of heaven in your poem. Beautiful!
the froggy ong chapter 1 . 6/12/2003
very beautiful indeed...i like what u write...(thanks 4 ur review b4, greatly appreciated..could u enlighten me a bit?)

Froggy San
Vuelo chapter 1 . 6/10/2003
Woah. Its like a fantastical numb world but the character is still unhappy cuz tehy're not living. confusing at times but i like it a lot. good work!
Just Wolf chapter 1 . 6/8/2003
Deeply atmospheric fic...very, incredibley beautiful enchanting... soft and senuos, each word a spirit of its own. incredible.

(*thanx again, reviews are still much appreciated*)
Wooffles chapter 1 . 6/7/2003
Um...wow. This is really beautiful poetry. I wish I could write like this.
Queen of Spades chapter 1 . 6/3/2003
That was beautifully written, I really like your imagery and the way you word it...Its just :) you are a good writer, keep writing :)
Nevermore Forevermore chapter 1 . 5/31/2003
I love it! Very nice!
Muzak-Freak06 chapter 1 . 5/26/2003
I like! Beautiful imagery and wonderful use of language. Brings a sense of beauty to the poem. Keep on writing!

P.S.- thx for reviewing my work, I appreciate it!
Exiled-Knight chapter 1 . 5/11/2003
that was absolutely beautiful. Keep Writing