Reviews for Feelin' Strange
Reptils chapter 1 . 5/11/2003
Der Song ist sehr schön.

Ich empfinde allerdings einige Wortwiederholungen als störend, z.B. hier:

Somebody, tell me where I am

this feels so strange

Somebody, tell me who I am

I'm feelin' strange

Dafür fand ich aber diese Strophe ehrlich genial:

Eyes wide open, seeing but not believing

sumthing's coming down on me

Mouth wide spread, freeing the pain inside

sumthing's coming down on me

the beast has it's name - reality

Ich verbeuge mich vor soviel Kreativität.
sathepine chapter 1 . 5/11/2003
Wow. You're good with your emotions in poetry. Keep up the good work )
not sure yet chapter 1 . 5/11/2003
wow, very interesting poem, a lil too repetitive at some parts, but otherwise, excellent excellent job, lots to think about here
Wrong Name Tag chapter 1 . 5/11/2003
Pretty good, but at parts the repetition seems to be a bit much. Otherwise, nice job, I really liked the verse "Eyes wide open, seeing but not believing/sumthing's coming down on me/Mouth wide spread, freeing the pain inside/sumthing's coming down on me/the beast has it's name - reality" Nice job

~Jess
hoellenwauwau chapter 1 . 5/11/2003
"Losing my sanity, weakening the chain/

Found the key to eternity, I'm goin' insane"

"the beast has it's name - reality"

Einfach genial! _

cio, hoellenwauwau