AWESOME story!

OMG! That was spooky. I don't know if I'll sit in my room with the lights off for a while. ;D (Yeah, I'm not kidding.) Well done!

SF

Heard it already. Won't keep me up. Sorry.

omg that is so creepy! did Sarah do it? she was drunk after all

That was pretty good. I think (by reading the reviews) that this was a retelling of something off Urban Legends, though I've never seen it. It reminds me of the one with the sick girl who stays home with her terrier and the phsyco gets out and...well, you know the rest. if you don't, I can e-mail it to ya later. It's a great ghost story. A tradition at the Halloween Parties I go to. Overt all, this was a good story. Good feeling of comraderie and good drunk scene. It is fun to write drunk people. Well, l8er!

Katt

that is CREEPY good story.

...have you been to by any chance? The Urban Legends Reference Pages?

Can you say 'rip off?' Maybe no one else has seen Urban Legends, but I watched it when I was in fifth grade. It gave me nightmares then, but now, 5 years later, I am a bit over it. Besides, you didn't do a very good job of ripping it off.

OOh. SAWEET! I think it would have been a little better if there could have been a bit more explanation as to what killed her. The exchange between the girls is very realistic, and I like it. The drunked cry of "Don't pull the squirrel, he's already got a long enough tail" was great, by the way.

OH MY GOD! That is really freaky. I love it. Gave me some major chills. Wow, you have to continue so that I can figure out who did it. Pleze. Even if you didn't intend to continue you have to.