Hehe, yeah, that was a pretty good story. Nice joke at the end.

You should have more white space though, it looks rather cramped and a little hard to read right now.

But, I have to admit I don't really like these kinds of stories that discourage picking up hitchhikers, even though I guess you shouldn't. If you ever wind up as a hitchhiker cause your car breaks down or you needed to rely on strangers another way, I doubt you'd like these stories much either, haha.

But, good overall. )

That was pretty cool.

That story is SO true! and that katie chick sounds like A snit. one, you should continue it.

clever!