Reviews for Ramblings of a Teenage Psychopath or Holden On
butterflye chapter 1 . 6/21/2003
very cool story.
visiondust chapter 1 . 6/3/2003
disturbing... you have a knack for writing, i like your almost semi-poetic prose style. flows oh so beautifully.
sylph paean chapter 1 . 5/26/2003
i like the title. you have an excellent grasp of human emotion and my god, do i sound like a teacher or what. i'll stop now, but rest assured i love this piece.

-jd
Lami chapter 1 . 5/14/2003
“it makes me look pretty.” lmfao!

disturbing. twisted. i like it;)

esp the last bit.

i'm so gald you're barve enough to publish your homicidal tendencies, cause i enjoy reading about them:)

-Travis.
Frog rape is fun chapter 1 . 5/12/2003
Not bad. Yay! Could be better. Too repetitive in some areas and ideas forget it forget it I'll write it at home.