|Reviews for Ramblings of a Teenage Psychopath or Holden On|
| butterflye chapter 1 . 6/21/2003
very cool story.
| visiondust chapter 1 . 6/3/2003
disturbing... you have a knack for writing, i like your almost semi-poetic prose style. flows oh so beautifully.
| sylph paean chapter 1 . 5/26/2003
i like the title. you have an excellent grasp of human emotion and my god, do i sound like a teacher or what. i'll stop now, but rest assured i love this piece.
| Lami chapter 1 . 5/14/2003
“it makes me look pretty.” lmfao!
disturbing. twisted. i like it;)
esp the last bit.
i'm so gald you're barve enough to publish your homicidal tendencies, cause i enjoy reading about them:)
| Frog rape is fun chapter 1 . 5/12/2003
Not bad. Yay! Could be better. Too repetitive in some areas and ideas forget it forget it I'll write it at home.