Reviews for cry
akaSummer chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
Wow. This is really great. I like the meter (appropriate term use?) you used. Also, great imagery.

Summer
La Solange chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
Short and powerful. This is amazing. I always tend to write lengthy poems... this is perfect. Keep. it. up.

sol
obsidian katana chapter 1 . 5/22/2003
cool, i like this! neat format, nicely written, nicely described. good job!
CoolBeans18s chapter 1 . 5/11/2003
Wonderful! Very emotional!

CoolBeans18s
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 5/11/2003
This was very heart-felt. I liked the way you presented this by using a new pattern.

Heart of the Sword
Kesshi Mashin chapter 1 . 5/11/2003
What a sad poem... *sniffle* So emotional, so good... keep on writin...