hey, you haven't updated for a while. i'm really interested in your story.
is it possible that you update sometime soon?
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yeah...it's kinda depressing...but i still liked it. _ thanx for reviewing! sorry if i dun update soon, i'm feeling a bit lazy. p anywayz, pls update soon!

nice job! _ do update soon!

nicely done! _ thanx for reviewing my fic! can't wait for the nxt chappie!

aw

why was jack acting like that?

update soon please

Orrhh... It melts my heart totally...

Is this real?...

Looking forward to the next chapter.. If there is any...

I juz read this chpt, this misunderstanding will really make Jack very miserable. This one i'm sure...

Well, mercury moon indicated tat Jack and Chin should get together in chpt, ain't she good at guessing the later chpts?

I'm also eager to know how the story developes. It will greatly affect...

good job! _ whose the new char? pls update soon!

glad u put up 2 chappies! _ nicely done! pls update soon!

Yeah... I found it out just after I reviewed another story!lol! It looks like Zacks mind is getting to him mean, remembering and reflecting the times that had passed... poor Chin! lol! Sick! I hate that! Great job P

oh god! poor Zack and Chin! ( great story though... how do you know who has added you to their favourités authors list? ( Im new! S)

Nice. Very nice. Sugoi. :) It seems pretty realistic. I think that kind of situation happens a lot in real life. I hope Chin and Jack really do get together though. Lol. I'm such a sucker for these stories. I like happy endings. One thing I noticed is that you change the tense sometimes like in the first chapter. Also, it's kind of hard to figure out who's the pronoun sometimes. But overall very good. :)

the cliff-hanger at the end is great! _ can't wait to read more! update soon!

i LOVED THIS CHAPTER! Great suspense at the end! please write some more!

great chapter! well done! oh! wonder whats gonna happen next.. O