So...this story was stuck in my head ALL day, lol.

I love it. Honestly when I first saw it, I had my doubts, but, its really cute.

Even if it is a tragedy ;D

Oh my, this is definitely one of the most original poems I've ever read. You have great talent in making the poem flow.

Just on a point of interest, why do u capitalize every word? my apologies if any offense is taken.

Anyways, keep writing, this is great!

It's interesting... heh. It isn't as eloquent or flowing as it could be, but the idea of becoming water is intriguing...

Lol, this was one WIERD piece of writing. Good point though..LOL/

Lyria