| Reviews for Ashes |
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  Spark Writer chapter 1 . 4/14/2012 Nice! |
 and-now-the-world chapter 1 . 5/24/2006 universal truth. thats going on my favourites :) |
| Harmony the Author chapter 1 . 3/20/2006 a beautiful, beautiful metaphor. keep it up |
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 3/19/2006 I like the simplicity yet great empathy in your poem. |
| vcs chapter 1 . 3/4/2006 nice imagery |
| Penumbrae chapter 1 . 11/28/2005 I like this. It leaves me wanting more, yet feeling satisfied. |
| AmberBloom chapter 1 . 8/16/2004 very pretty. i liked the comparison, nice. the last two lines were my fave. good work! |
| SugarLuva chapter 1 . 12/19/2003 Hm, very powerful. very good. |