Reviews for Ashes
Spark Writer chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
Nice!
and-now-the-world chapter 1 . 5/24/2006
universal truth. thats going on my favourites :)
Harmony the Author chapter 1 . 3/20/2006
a beautiful, beautiful metaphor.

keep it up
Anonymous chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
I like the simplicity yet great empathy in your poem.
vcs chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
nice imagery
Penumbrae chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
I like this. It leaves me wanting more, yet feeling satisfied.
AmberBloom chapter 1 . 8/16/2004
very pretty. i liked the comparison, nice. the last two lines were my fave. good work!
SugarLuva chapter 1 . 12/19/2003
Hm, very powerful. very good.