Reviews for Capricorn
Moon Eagle Wolf clan chapter 1 . 5/22/2003
hmm My opinion there's too many Ands. Start a new line just with the first word, a comma can mean the same things as the word And. also thanks for my review, there are a few of my poems for my son, He was my little Angel, Sleep My Angel and Crying in the night. Keep writing you'll get where you wanna be.
Fallen Hawk chapter 1 . 5/12/2003
Sad, deep. It's amazing.