|Reviews for Capricorn|
| Moon Eagle Wolf clan chapter 1 . 5/22/2003
hmm My opinion there's too many Ands. Start a new line just with the first word, a comma can mean the same things as the word And. also thanks for my review, there are a few of my poems for my son, He was my little Angel, Sleep My Angel and Crying in the night. Keep writing you'll get where you wanna be.
| Fallen Hawk chapter 1 . 5/12/2003
Sad, deep. It's amazing.