Reviews for My Observations of You
initiative chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
what do you mean this isn't the best thing ever? it's great!
i love the way you wrote it. it's descriptive, and the way you compare the latte foam to sea foam- i just loved that. god, i am such a weirdo, but i truly believe this is one of the best things i've read in a while.
kep chapter 1 . 5/12/2003
wow. that's great. you have a talent for picking out details and expanding them into good reading. it's a hard thing to do, but you do it well.