|Reviews for Comments|
| CoolBeans18s chapter 6 . 2/10/2004
This is great! I really liked it!
| CoolBeans18s chapter 5 . 2/10/2004
Awesome form! This piece is amazing! I love the feeling it creates!
| The Zaniak chapter 6 . 1/17/2004
The last three I didn't like particularly either, but the finger one I loved. Whaddya know?
| The Zaniak chapter 3 . 1/17/2004
Well, I enjoyed this haiku, but I found the other two fairly uninteresting.
| Miz E. Mak chapter 6 . 9/29/2003
o! cool. I really like this! I don't know why you are trying to play it off as not one of your best ones. I think it rocks.
| Keep it 100 chapter 6 . 9/26/2003
~Heart of the Sword
| Magpie Poet chapter 2 . 9/25/2003
agreed. and more common than the flu.
we need a vaccine against hate? or herd immunity...
(don't mind me)
| Children of the Root chapter 6 . 9/25/2003
I don't know. I think this is quite a good haiku.
Keep writing. I like your work in this collection.
| Children of the Root chapter 5 . 9/25/2003
lol. yes, modify. ;) don't see why not...
Very cool haiku though. I like the image it creates.
| Children of the Root chapter 4 . 9/25/2003
very true. What's that saying? "Still waters run deep" or something like that. People are hardly ever what they seem like on the outside. There's always that inside part that's hidden from the rest of the world.
I really like this haiku. Keep up the good work! And keep writing.
| Children of the Root chapter 3 . 9/25/2003
its okay to not always get the syllables right. :)
Anyways, great haiku!
| Children of the Root chapter 2 . 9/25/2003
ah, awesome work. I like this alot. And I agree, hatred is horrible.
| Children of the Root chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
good question. I wonder the same. Good Haiku!
| Lux's Confusion chapter 5 . 7/11/2003
having read all of them so far i have to tell you, your grasp of how things truely appear to you is amazing. wow. lovely work...
| Keep it 100 chapter 5 . 6/26/2003
This really described dreams because it was so surreal. Great work.
...and a new form is born. It's name is: Modified Tanka.
~Heart of the Sword