Reviews for Superficial
Magpie Poet chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
*applauds*
ittybittytreefrog chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
Very good poem. It's very true, too. Your use of metaphors is amazing. Enough said.
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 5/12/2003
I liked that you used a mirror to present this.

Heart of the Sword