Hey, pretty cool...animals have souls! lol, but good, keep up the good work.

Good chapter. Your writing style reminds me of someone... J. Robert King perhaps? Well done. I liked at the end how you had Drow wonder about the point of his existance and weather or not he and Ademu had souls instead of Ademu. Ademu, the non-dark elf of the two, therefore the assumed good-guy of the two (because the only good dark elf I know of has the rarity of purple eyes, if you know what I mean!) you would have ecpected him to worry about something like having a soul, and not be the one who hastily acepts the fact that everyone came into the world somehow, and his way was just different. Keep it up!

Wow. I finally got around to reading this fic. It is very intersting. I saw the title Darius and I thought of the Darius from Persia who invaded Greece in 490 B.C. Ok... History lesson...
Anyway, this is very good and I hope you continue!
~Laura

this is really good you should keep going!

~Mistress Battousai

Interesting so far! I can't wait for your next update!