Reviews for I am, and I am not
ittybittytreefrog chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
Very good poem. I loved the rhyming scheme. The last line was funny.
aleppine chapter 1 . 5/20/2003
This one has the ring of a song to it ... I love some of the imagery you've used - 'wobbling in stileto heels'. This has a silent sort of rhythm to it.

Dude, I don't understand why you've put up with this person flaming, or why you've kept their stupid reviews (?) if they can even be described as such.

Keep writing!
Natalie Portman chapter 1 . 5/14/2003
wow, kewl poetry! I really liked it!
Gemtog4319 chapter 1 . 5/13/2003
OHH QUEECH QUON FT! see i CAN make hamster sounds. NOW I CAN GET MY OWN ROLLER COASTER! This story is a little too lenghty but it still made laugh. I even picked my nose at the end! And that's a accomplishment! Great Job! I'd give it a 9.7 on the Richter Scale...outta 36724828. You need to write some more stories! You only have like 2! Even though I hate them, others may like them. Great Flopping Flapjacks! I just hit my knee!OH THE WAFFLE SPEAKS!OH SPEAK AGAIN BEIGHT ANGEL!YOU BRIGHTEN MY DAY WHICH HAS BEEN SADDENED BY THIS TERRIBLE STORY!I LOVE YOU!AHZAH!
hoellenwauwau chapter 1 . 5/13/2003
Great poem! loved it.

"I am that slowly lifting glowing

Spirit flying oh so high

Shower down those tears I cried

Lift my soul up to the sky."

very cool! and I liked the ending, the whole meaning of it!

cio, hoellenwauwau