|Reviews for Del|
| decided chapter 1 . 5/15/2003
Especially liked the last words.
Keep it up.
| hurtmushroom chapter 1 . 5/13/2003
WOW, this is so cool. Very tragic, very sad but such a great imagery!
"Forgotten lives speed by."
"Your numbing kiss, my death wish"
Wow, actually I should have put your whole poem into this review, it's all so well written...
Keep it up!