Reviews for Del
decided chapter 1 . 5/15/2003
Very nice.

Especially liked the last words.

Keep it up.
hurtmushroom chapter 1 . 5/13/2003
WOW, this is so cool. Very tragic, very sad but such a great imagery!

"Forgotten lives speed by."

"Your numbing kiss, my death wish"

Wow, actually I should have put your whole poem into this review, it's all so well written...

Keep it up!

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