hmm...strangely enough, it makes sense to me. very cool poem, your description is so vivid! thanks for the review. lol, u weren't the only one who could totally relate. great poem tho, keep it up!

Very interesting and the words are dark and yet beautiful. I like this a lot. Most poems are our best when it comes out of no where. _

Wow, that's really good. Really really deep. I like the last little stanza thing, the "there is no freedom for those who dream" That's just a really powerful bit. This was really good.

Wow! Amazing!

This is absolutely amazing. You seem to sum up all emotions!

Wow, with 71 stories, I had NO idea where to start so I just clicked the first one! How on earth can you write so much?

N-e-wayz, thanx for reviewing, everyone loves getting reviews! _!

Well, gtg, keep up the good work!

Toodles!

~Rani~

Bitterness...ouch.

Nevertheless your talent was never wavering. This is incredible.

I like this a lot.

It is very strange but quite meaningful too.

Diana x

There is no freedom for those who dream? Huh. I hope that's not the case...seeing as I'm one of them...but in a way, it makes sense. When you put to much hope in your dreams, you could indeed become a slave to them...

Interesting poem, very thouht provoking. I like it.

This poem is filled with various meanings, from what I can tell. It can show someone, you, I'd imagine, with self-inflicted torture, either mental or physical. And I see others. But, the main meaning I get is about the extroverted world's collective hatred for abberance and originality- for the introverted way of life.

As for the mechanics, I love the language. And while I hate the short lines, it gives a sense of... urgency. And, the ending is incredibly. I love it.

I don't find it strange at all. I found the lines "there is no/ freedom/ for those who/ dream" very striking. and i guess it stands true because when one dreams one is bound by the chains of hoping and waiting for that dream to come true. nice piece! )

Einfach nur genial...

short, yet very nicely written. I love the words you used. Keep it up! D

This is a really good poem. I think that sometimes all of us here have felt caged in one way or another (and have written poems about it, haha). But seriously this is a great poem. I liked it.

-keep writing-

I don't think I agree with the last line. The only time that I am free is when I dream. But other than that, another terrific poem! Sorry I haven't been around to read the new stuff *sheepish grin* But I like what I'm reading!

"There is no freedom for those who dream" ...I love that! As a matter of fact, the entire poem is great. Good work!

Wow...gefällt mir. Besonders der letzte Abschnitt. Irgendwie ist ja schon was wahres dran...So ganz verstehe ich es noch nicht, da muss ich es mir wahrscheinlich noch x-mal durchlesen, aber ich mag die Stimmung...