Reviews for Falling Flowers |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() O i luv Love poems! I can't get enough of them! I love the message that you want the person not neccisarily the items they can give you! yOu desevere a favorite and a Watch! |
![]() ![]() ![]() U have so many talent I love your poems it gives me strength I know this might sound crazy but I was heartbroken once and never wanted to live another day.. I read your poems and it hits me that there is still hope wow... ok im getting akll mushy now huh.. well keep up the good work _ -Anna- |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonderful. really touching |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice, sentimentally romantic poem. One nit...it would be best to write out this one line - fourth from the bottom - as thus: "For each and every passing day" Refrain from writing the word 'and' like '&'. Otherwise, very nice piece. The imagery of flowers in the first and third stanzas enhanced the fragile emotions... Thank you for sharing this. :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the way you made flowers as a symbol. ~Heart of the Sword |
![]() ![]() Your poem was truly beautiful. It is a pleasure to read works which are so passionate and alive. Please, keep writing. And sinsere thanks for being the first to review my work. I promise i will have the next chapter up in a few days. Thanks once again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() another great poem. it rhyms real good |