Reviews for Falling Flowers
Candyluv18 chapter 1 . 5/12/2004
O i luv Love poems! I can't get enough of them! I love the message that you want the person not neccisarily the items they can give you! yOu desevere a favorite and a Watch!
BrokenLover chapter 1 . 8/12/2003
U have so many talent I love your poems it gives me strength I know this might sound crazy but I was heartbroken once and never wanted to live another day.. I read your poems and it hits me that there is still hope wow... ok im getting akll mushy now huh.. well keep up the good work _

-Anna-
dreamscatcher chapter 1 . 6/18/2003
wonderful. really touching
Elij chapter 1 . 6/3/2003
Nice, sentimentally romantic poem.

One nit...it would be best to write out this one line - fourth from the bottom - as thus:

"For each and every passing day"

Refrain from writing the word 'and' like '&'.

Otherwise, very nice piece. The imagery of flowers in the first and third stanzas enhanced the fragile emotions...

Thank you for sharing this.

:-)
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 5/20/2003
I liked the way you made flowers as a symbol.

~Heart of the Sword
rainbowcloud16 chapter 1 . 5/19/2003
Your poem was truly beautiful. It is a pleasure to read works which are so passionate and alive. Please, keep writing. And sinsere thanks for being the first to review my work. I promise i will have the next chapter up in a few days.

Thanks once again.
flowers in May chapter 1 . 5/14/2003
another great poem. it rhyms real good