This seems undirected. It didn't really make much sense to me, but maybe there's a backstory I need to know or something.

~Kiara

lol, well tweaked. loved it, made me giggle...again. Bit of a weak ending, but you should SOO still turn this into a series.

Lyria

P.s. i love the "Cos he's a poofter." but, that made me laugh the hardest first time i heard it. Youre a comic genius at times dude.