Grr Nasty Tim - hehe funny name for an evil guy. Anyways yay you should totally do a sequel! I'll look forward to it! This is such a sweet story, seriously you should get it published or something. Mikey's so brave with Tim, chosing to be erased rather than joining him - good for him! Yay go Mikey for saving George, hehe in Tim's face! Eww poor Mikey having his back cut at! Cuts really make me cringe! I'm glad he managed to save Tanya though. Interesting conversation he has with Tim, when all of Tim's coldness goes away for a short time. Madwe me feel a bit sorry for Tim too. Mikey sounds at if he looks really bad - poor guy! Aww yay he's free! Him and Tanya are so cute together!

Adam is very cute. When he met Mikey's dad it was really touching. I agree with Tanya's attitude to the GHost Council, they are v mean for using Mikey like that. Mikey's actually so nice, going on about how the evil guy can't help the way he is. Bless. Aww poor him and his blisters - ouch! Made my toes curl!

Hehe I love how Mikey does all that illegal ghost stuff so often. He is lovely. The house sounds kinda creepy though, all those poor spirits. Aww I like Adam, he's sweet too. Hehe that whole thing when they're thinking of the worst thing that could happen is funny. Aww the ends so tense and upsetting, I wonder what Mikey's going to do!

Aww Mikey's so selfless! I think it's cute that he keeps 'sacrificing yourself for everyone' even though I can sympathise with Sandra's view too. She just cares about him - so sweet. Mikey's mum however seems to be less caring - so sad! I'm glad Sandra was angry at her. Poor Mikey and his sad memories - well at least he's remembering more about his life now.

I wish we could add picture to fictionpress. Then we could show everyone what our characters are meant to look like. oh well. I thought your description of the picture on Mikey's back was really good though. Could Mikey have been a killer? Poor guy, he seems so nice, but why would the torturer want to pay him back? Aww they kissed! So cute! I am a hopeless romantic and are therefore satisfied :). Oh so they're soulmates? So cute! Oh I see, Mikey's father and all that. Aww so sad :(. Poor old Mikey should stop blaming himself for so much. Bless him he's lovely

Hehe ur not being annoying lol. Aww poor Mikey! I wanna give him a hug! I'm glad he could save Tanya from the car. He's such a great hero, methinks, but I don't really like that Ghost Council for putting such a burden on him.

Wow! Long chappie here! Which I could write longer chapters but oh well - my attention span is just too short. Nice twist bdw, and I'm glad Mikey won't cease to exist. Will he be able to destroy the evil soul though? I hope so. Mikey and Sandra's reunion is so cute. The part with the baby's cute too, interesting how he can feel the soul. Great story!

I totally love your plot - it's so original! Ooh Mikey seems like a rather talented ghost - being able to do all that stuff before his time. Sandra seems really nice. Oh so what's going to happen now? What's going to happen to poor old Mikey?

Poor old Mikey-poo. It's true, ceasing to exist any more would kinda suck, and Christopher could come back as a ghost. Brave of Mikey to go against Tanya's idea though. Ooh Adam's going to enter his mind - exciting stuff!

Hehe what great first words lol. I really like Tanya at the moment, she seems kinda understanding. Poor Mikey I still feel really sorry for him dying so nastily. I hope he can save Christopher!

Hehe I'm reading ur hard work now - it's very good! Aww poor Mikey! I feel so sorry for him having the whole good and evil thing inside himself. Bless.

Mikey seems nice for a ghost. I wonder what happened in his past and how old he really is. Ooh myserious stuff! Good job - and thanx for all ur reviews!

Wow! I love the ending, i love the story! This is amazing, you are a fantastic writer! I look forward to reading more from you! _

Tamarisk a.k.a. JessieRose

p.s. I have added you to my fav authors list! *angelic smile* _

I can see why this took three years! It's amazing! Well excuse me while i go and finish reading it!

JessieRose (so use to putting that after my reviews!)

I mean Tamarisk!

Another fantastic chapter...should i be reviewing every chapter? oh well never mind, great, pure genious (not me of course, i can't spell!) I can't believe you've got so few reviews, it's a brilliant story! Oh well, their loss!

JessieRose / Tamarisk