Reviews for A Spin on Things |
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addie chapter 10 . 10/28/2009 write more? please? this story is too great to be abandoned! :) |
randomperson chapter 10 . 10/22/2006 *collapsing with laughter* Why the bloody hell did you stop writing this? It's hilariously funny, and your description of the english mannerisms and language is really well-done! Why does this have to be another great story on fictionpress that just suddenly stops, at the perfect moment when it's built up momentum and promises to be a great read? *frustrated* Oh, well. I'm sad you didn't continue writing this, but it shows your talent as a writer, and I hope you've done well in whatever direction you've decided to take your life. Thanks. |
Jesse chapter 10 . 7/2/2005 I am speechless... well, not quite... I love your character developement and everything. This is an awesome story and you must update! |
inkspots chapter 10 . 3/31/2005 i love it!can you pretty please update? please please please please please please please please please? - alex - |
Lexgendary chapter 10 . 7/23/2004 hope u write more soon! been waiting for a while already _ |
Tessandra chapter 10 . 7/8/2004 Loved it. You have a really great story here - I love the banter between the two main characters. And Ellie's little secret made me laugh. Only - like some of the other reviewers said - I don't get the public school thing, how you said it was hypocritical that she went there and is now left-wing? Guess we just have a different system over here. (Lol - my favorite line was in the first chapter and Ellie decided not to emigrate to the US cause "they've got Bush." _. I wouldn't go either) Can't wait for more, especially if Ellie and Ed realize they like each other. And I really like Jackie, too. She's hysterical! ~Tessandra |
blackeyes chapter 10 . 4/4/2004 cool story.. but i don't understand the public school joke or amazing thing. watz that all bout? |
goo goo ga ga 00 chapter 10 . 3/21/2004 i like it so far! now update it soon! |
Death Princess chapter 10 . 2/14/2004 OH OH THIS IS SUCH A COOL FIC! arw u english btw cuz if ur not u did a pretty gud job of makin english chars. I like realy gud fic so be a nice girl and UPDATE PLZ! btw wat hppened 2 princess mags she cumin bak netime soon? |
H. M. Banson chapter 10 . 2/9/2004 Hehe... what an excellent twist! We get a little insight into Ellie's family... heh, not what I'd expected, but great! M, these chapters are all excellent... a wonderful story you have here! Please update it soon... I'm dying to read more! (and for more of the amazingly witty arguments between Ed and Ellie ;) Always, ~Hollie Marie |
H. M. Banson chapter 6 . 2/9/2004 Hehe, what a great story... I don't pretend to know anything about politics, but your story has absolutely captivated me! The characters are great; I love how none of them are one-dimensional, cliched people. Pat's awesome, and I love Ed! Ellie's a great, vibrant character, and Jackie's just plain cool. I also am adoring the bickering between Ed and Ellie... some of the digs were pretty clever, I must say! Hmm... off to see what happens next! Fantastic job thus far! Always, ~Hollie Marie |
Written chapter 4 . 1/21/2004 Heh. Quite cute. _ i like the wit. |
Written chapter 3 . 1/21/2004 You have very good dialoguing skills and. . . sparks almost flew. . . if it wasn't for all the arguing. . . _~ |
Written chapter 2 . 1/21/2004 how real you've made him seem! good job! |
Written chapter 1 . 1/21/2004 _ . *is an idiot but loves your story* I suppose that redeems me? . Good work so far! I loff it quite a bit, despite being American. [have only been to britain twice actually] . But this sounds like some good old fun. . . |